Mrccbirdguy's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brave Pawn]

Well, the music was a bit over the top and didn't exactly fit. The plot was surreal and simple enough. Not bad.

[The Blind Fisherman]

Text games are one of those things that if you don't do it right, there's nothing fun about it. In this case, you've got a game that really can't explain itself.
as simple as it should be it is needlessly complicated. There's nothing fun about this game, no easter eggs or any sort of adventure.
Even the classic games (Like zork) had limited fun. consider putting in simple pixel art to see what's going on (I know it's a blind fisherman but you need something more.) As a plus however, I think putting the simple instructions in like you did was a good move. Better luck next time. :)

xhunterko responds:

I was actually considering having the instructions disappear but thought, 'they didn't like that with the other one I put up'. Thanks for play though!

[Xmas Quest Beta 2.0]

other than some tiny clips of okay music, this game has little to offer. It seems that it was rushed out in time for christmas, but there isn't much quality to it. Besides that, you're using the term "point and click" very loosely.
For future reference, maybe you should start earlier on a holiday project, or dedicate your time to a more non-themed game (which will get alot more attention than many holiday games already out.)

[Paint me: Ship]

It was alright I guess, not much of a game. It could have used some music and maybe a few more pages to color. Could have been alot better.

[Lost Gifts]

Graphically and audibly, this is a pretty nice game. It just felt like it was lacking somewhat. maybe an upgrade screen or some movin enemies. Also the controls were somewhat touch and go. other than that, pretty nice!

[Holiday Message]

First off,the sound is too simplistic. Your little characters are poorly animated and not too interesting. (I also looked around for your comic and couldn't find anything.) That plus none of them are interesting enough to warrent asking about them. Finally, I wouldn't consider this a game. A simple suggestion would be to take this down and wait until your characters are a bit more developed (As well as your flash skills) before coming out with a holiday message. I do however look forward to your characters and comics once they've been developed :) Good luck!

[Unfinished Checkers]

I'm giving you a low score for a few reasons. 1 the song on the intro screen isn't yours nor do you use it in your citing. You've put up an incomplete game.The only thing this really does is lower your ultimate grade as a game maker on here. It's got alot of bugs in it and it needs alot of work.
On the subject of games, Checkers is such a common game online that having yet another version with no special features really isn't nessicary. (Spelling I know...) good luck on your future flashmaking!

[Santa's "Clause"]

I give you a plus for your physics and your decent holiday concept, but the industrial techno music dosen't fit. Try a nice little holiday medley or a simple jinglebells remix. Good luck on future game making :)

[The First Fire]

I agree with originalpheonix. Although your graphics and sfx are pretty good, your puzzles are somewhat predictable. Although they have decent plots, these games are becoming very easy to beat. Better luck with your next ones!

[Internet Avenger]

Pretty good! The music was pretty catchy! Bonus for creativity!