Mrccbirdguy's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gomoku Attack]

It's like the bizzare love child of othello and connect 4 (but with 5 pieces.) These kinds of games are difficult to program because the computer player already knows the best moves. It would be okay as a 2 player game,but not really in the condition it is in. And could you add some music?

[MOON]

First off, The pixel art was nice. I dig that. Your plot of the guy losing his mind to space madness was alright. But alot of it didn't make sense. I get the guy hallucinatng with the phone and the mirror and all that, But the self-destruct thing was too farfetched.
Why would an industrial company have a self-destruct sequence on a spacecraft that costs millions and only has one person on the moon? (I know it's more of a scientific thing, but things like this really bother me and it really takes away from the plot. Also, it's one of those convienient things that people use with writing so they don't have to develop more plot.) All in all, it was alright, The pacing was a tad slow, but I really didn't mind it. Nice work :)

EventHorizon responds:

=Really good review, thanks for writing it!, at the beginning John believed to be hallucinations but in reality the things he sees are real, actually at the end the protagonist is possessed by that presence, if you look carefully you can see bleeding from his hands full just as the presence of blood=

[Perfect Snowman]

It was alright, the last puzzle I had to consult the walkthrough. Maybe you could highlight items a bit better or something. Overall, pretty good.

[VirtualLargeMaze - EP1000]

This game could be very nice, but it dosen't feel completed. There is no sound or indicator as to where I am. I'm not even sure if I went over a certain path or not already. You need to dedicate a bit more time to this kind of project. Maybe add a compass feature or something. As is, it isn't that good.

[Ski Spree]

I should have pizza-ed when I french fried... This was a pretty good game, It would have been good if the high scores worked. Nice music, keep up the good work. :)

PapaSoup responds:

Thank you! Still trying to fix the high scores.

[Shapes!]

First off, Why was it rated T for teen? There wasn't anything really to it. Alot of your walkways that I first believed to be too narrow were the easiest way to get through many of the labyrinths. This was an easy game, the music was decent enough, but it didn't really offer anything to replay value. A bit more effort and it'll be really good. :)

coderchick94 responds:

I know. I tried to do rated E, but it wouldn't let me publish.

[Super Princess Luna]

Again, I see a pattern from your other games, Your graphics are decent enough. But your controls and physics are way off. Your music was decent enough, but your stage win music (The mario song) didn't seem appropriate.
You really need to work on your controlability of your characters and maybe make some kind of useful attack, Also, what's the point of the fairy? it really didn't add anything to have the thing buzzing around not doing anything and really added to the frustration factor.
You could really turn this into a good game worth playing if you do some tweaking, Good luck :)

PrincessNinjato responds:

Thank you, Siluna the fairy can pick up Neocrystals for you

[Super Chick 2 - Christmas]

Other than semi-decent graphics, the controls were so bad that I gave up mid firststage. The music is alright, but from what Goady says, you didn't give credit where it's due. You should probably tweak this game a bit and then put it back on when you've made some improvements. Better luck next time.

[Acorn Mania]

First off, I would have considered this more of an avoid typed game. Secondly, the graphics were nice, but the game felt kinda shallow. The music was decent enough, but You need something more. Whether it's powerups or upgrades, you need to have something that will keep people coming back for more. I will give you a few points on creativity! Better luck on your next games :)

[xWorld]

This dosen't feel like it was ever playtested or even listened to. The music was so grating that I had to turn the audio to play. Even the gameplay wasn't anygood.
My suggestion is to take this down, tweak it a bit so the game actually works, and remove the medal. If you're going to make a game for on here, make it right. Better luck next time!