Graphically, it wasn't bad, but your programming is really whacked. It shouldn't be this laggy. Second of all, Don't use a licensed game like zelda. The only thing that can happen (if your game gets better) is that Nintendo shuts you down for using their character. It would have been a lot better if it was your own character with an interesting story line and not some weird cyberpunk fan-fiction of zelda.
Good luck on your next attempt.