Mrccbirdguy's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark II]

Ok. After playing, I feel that there was a great deal holding this game back. the two biggest issues were plot and gameplay.

Graphically, it's alright. But the constantly slow flash of darkness is just plain annoying. There were a few spots where things killed the character that didn't quite make sense. Controls were alright.
(Spoilers)-I wanted to make this a little fun...
Plot was something that just bothered me from the start.
I saw that you were going for something poetic, a real work of art
That's all fine and good but your poetry was a wreck,
You may want to invest in some sort of spellcheck.
The plot of his wife killing the baby made no frigging sense
she had an alibi that she was with her boyfriend, not at the apartment.
Also a motive was something you overlooked,
You can learn about this in any ol' mystery book.
The babysitter was also a secondary witness to the fathers crime
There is no doubt that they would have testified so the father would get maximum time (That one was hard)

I feel with a bit more practice and some more time spent,
You can make a game on here that rates 100%
Best of luck-Mrccbirdguy

JackAstral responds:

Ahaha fair enough- thanks for giving it a go anyway!

[Very Scary Halloween Game]

Not really proofed against cheating. right clicking and hitting play allows you to beat the game. Also music credits are in order. I know its Andrew gold, but this sounds like a remix.

Better luck next time.

[A Day at the Library]

I love your games! The puzzles in this one were pretty good. It did feel a tad short though. but still plenty of fun!

[Horror Paintings Parodies]

Great work as usual! Loved the paintings used!

[Land of Enki 2]

Excellent game! Great graphics and good sound. very fun to play!

TheEnkian responds:

Thank you!

[Phoenotopia]

By far, one of the greatest games on here. Excellent graphics, sound and plot.

[Mafia Girl Action]

Not sure how this got by. It just isn't that good. Your graphics are tiny, the controls are just off. Could have been much better.

[Spider in a Dollhouse]

your graphics are nice, controls are alright. no music... The only sound was the cell phone on the floor, Really, conceptually, it's okay, but it has no ending or real plot. I kind of wished for some sort of ending. Better luck next time.

[Cat Girl Reveal]

This felt thrown together. Graphically and conceptually, it's very poor in quality. I can't help but think that the only reason you made this game was to get Ad Revenue. Shame on you for that.

[Lost Child]

This was pretty good. Excellent graphics, good discordant sound which is perfect for this type of game and simple enough concept. I must agree with Acemcgunner who says that it needs a backstory. Anything to tell what's happening in game would be awesome. Good luck making more games!

SrRodilla responds:

Thanks you very much ;)

The game don´t have story, because i want that the game give feelings, but is true that this not is incompatible with a story. In my next game I will put more emphasis in this point.