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[Dungeons & Donuts 2]

The lag in this game is so bad that I can't beat the first level. Please fix it!

[game test]

Try again. Actually make a game. There's no challenge and your thumbnail is deceiving.

[Super Hunted 2]

Two steps forward, one step back.

Okay, On my last review, I mentioned that you had essentially used the Stencyl platformer engine to make your game, you still have. Your player character is too big or their hit box isn't functioning right. He tends to go through the floor after jumps and the platforming isn't difficult, it's glitchy.

The boss battle... No. I don't know what to say about it. The engine you made the game on obviously didn't support any kind of combat or attacks other than jumping.
There's no explanation of what to do or why you're doing it. It's a giant metal guy chasing a plane and you can stand on his head.

The music was good. If you made it on your own, great! if not, you need to credit it.

Again, Check out the game design forums, read some books on game design and keep at it.

2Mickennxtre68 responds:

I did make all of the music. I used a website called Beepbox.co, but do to the sheer open endedness of the site as well as the difficult and complicated compositions I made, I'm proud to say that is by far the best part of the game. I plan on uploading the soundtrack. Thank you for reviewing. I just want to get better and really appreciate it.

[Super Hunted]

First off, The engine you used for this is the Stencyl engine which in the past other game makers essentially copied, modified the levels a little bit and called it their own. You at least modified the sprites and gave it a basic storyline.

Secondly, A complete lack of sound made the game dull. Even jump sound effects would have been nice.

Lastly, the difficulty and plot. There wasn't any. The character's hit box is so big that it's really difficult to fall down holes, there's no enemies and I didn't care about the plot.

Seeing as how it's your first game, I'd suggest learning more about actual game design, plot and even working on character design.

Good luck!

2Mickennxtre68 responds:

The plot is a mixed bag for me. Looking back on this game I'm proud of what I accomplished but it's very artsy and hard to follow. It also feeds into a much bigger narrative of fanfics and webtoons that I'm not gonna get into.
Thanks for the feedback.

[Cross the river - Wolf Sheep and Cabbage]

Just boring. No music, No real challenge. Better luck next time.

[Fish Race Champions 3]

This was a glitchy mess. The mines minigame had mines that flashed in and out of existance, the shooting minigame was so full of sprites it slowed my computer to a crawl.

Needs quite a bit of fixes.

[Toxic Surfer]

It's not bad, It could use a few tweaks, Maybe some kind of upgrades or change in levels, but not bad.

The few things I did have trouble with was the hit detection of some of the items and enemies. I thought I had cleared a jump but lost by a pixel.

[Don't save the princess]

It's good. The humor is funny, but it Lags so bad that the game is virtually unplayable. I don't know why though, It shouldn't lag this bad.

pro100fartovuy responds:

I will fix it.

[Recoil Rampage]

Very clever and cool concept. I also like the music!