Mrccbirdguy's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[PIX (Menu Preview)]

As everyone else said, this isn't the time, or the place to submit a demo of a menu. All this does is sully your gamemaking account with a low rating. Why not make the actual game and then put it up?

[Maze Game]

Ok, these maze games are so boring with a lack of fun that there's no point in expanding on this one. They've been done to death with jumpscares, lame stories etc. My suggestion: Go with another genre. If you've got the talent and the time, go with something that hasn't been done over and over for nearly a decade.

[Loss]

very clever! Good music and nice graphics!

[Weak-Breaker]

I'll give you points for the handdrawn graphics (Don't see enough of those anymore) and the selection of music. For your first game, It's pretty nice! The story was a bit odd, but not bad. Kudos!

Aryles responds:

Thanks, all the positive comment seems to be focused on the graphics, music, and story, i'll put much effort in the gameplay in the next games.

[Stunt Ball Paul]

decent enough. Pretty loose controls though. Could use some more work in the sequel. Good music!

[Abducted]

good graphics. What's the point in subbing a demo? Also, despite that you described that A=Z and B=C in your comments, you should honestly change that ingame to reduce confusion. I myself had a bit of trouble before understanding what you meant in your commments. Also, add a plot. Give it a bit more effort and you've got a good game.

xyv555 responds:

I will change it very soon! thank you for you comments and very sory about the game controls. Im working on the storyline art screen.

[Maze RPG!]

With this being your first game (I'm assuming, judging from your profile.) It was a tad better than the other mouse maze games out there. Only problem with this is that mouse maze games are severely outdated and not that fun.
Again, with it being your first game, I can tell you put in a decent amount of effort. However, there was no sound, and your tags don't really make any sense. Try again with a better genre and be creative. Good luck on your game making future :)

[Horror Lab]

given that this is your first game, it isn't bad. the graphics and sounds are pretty decent. The concept is alright I suppose. Could use some more levels and a bit more challenge.

[Kurt Polat]

should be rated teen or mature. I wasn't quite sure of the story. needs work on translation as well.