Mrccbirdguy's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tillydale Heights]

To start, your graphics are decent. Story is okay, but your design has a lot of flaws. Jumping is very stiff as is throwing the balls. I often fell through platforms.
As it is, it's okay, but it really needs a lot of work. As this is your first game, my suggestion is to work a bit on your controls and platforming. Good luck!

[Me,Wake Up! Mini:Broccoli]

Your games are good, but you need a better translator.

Squeka responds:

Thanks :).
Maybe I'll try to ask my other member to translate it xD.

[Mushroom Cloud]

Your game is very good and quite addicting. There were a few spelling errors, but not bad at all!

[Cute Nyan Cat]

nyan cat is so overused. This is also a pretty weak concept. Try a little harder. Consider making your own characters.

[Cannonboy Falls in Love]

Beautiful graphics and very cute! The music got a bit monotonous but it was still pretty good 8 bit music. Game wise, I found it quite frustrating constantly retrying angles and double jumps to get past obstacles. It felt like I would nail one obstacle and then fail to land on the platform in the end. Overall, a pretty nice game.

[Dress Up Game]

Well, to start, I couldn't tell if the game was even loading. your file size is pretty big as well which means a long wait on a slower machine.
Game wise, It's alright, Your music is an interesting choice. (yet I didn't see anywhere where it was listed to give credit) Graphically, it could have been better. Looking at all the different choices of clothes, hair and everything else was alright, but it felt pretty cluttered.
Give some more effort with your graphics. You've got potential as a game maker, just make it your own (Give your character more pizzazz, there's tons of dress up dolls out there, make yours stand out somehow), Good luck!

[Toy Dog: The Game]

Well, your graphics and music are pretty good. You need a translation of your instructions (I can read spanish, but others probably can't.) You've got potential, just give it a lot of effort and keep at it.

[Scribble Nuts]

You had potential with this one, but to ripoff of something as big as scribblenauts, well, it just takes a lot away from your score. The music was alright, and your gathering concept was okay, but why take something that has been done?
My suggestion, Come up with your own character and backgrounds. Nothing is worse than a person that has a great idea but has to "borrow" someone else ideas to further their own. Good luck.

[Jerry Snipe]

So, you took the concept of ricochet kills, and rebranded it with Tom and Jerry (Which are owned by hanna barbara) Overall, very poor quality.

[MALLEO]

If this got blammed the first time, why would you even bother resubmitting it even though you know why it was blammed in the first place.

SunOh responds:

I thought I should give it a second chance.