Mrccbirdguy's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doomed Estate]

First off, Not a fighting game. More of a multi directional shooter. Secondly, it's not a good one. There isn't much to set it aside from some of the really good ones. One problem I found is your Isometric movement. (For example, take a look at the movement of solstice for the nes. Good music, interesting graphics but bad controls.)
You could do a lot to make this game more likable. Give it a story line and some variety in the levels and enemies.

[Once Upon An Apocalypse]

Despite it sounding nice. I'm not creating an account or logging in to another site to play your game. Get rid of the manditory log in and then we'll talk.

telles0808 responds:

Oh, that was my mistake, do you can clear your cache and try again please?

Now it's pure and free of any adds and log in needs.

[RedMan !]

Keep your demos, betas and tests on your dumping grounds. This isn't ready for a full submission. Resubmit when you've made a full game or at least a few levels.

foued25 responds:

This is as you said just a demo to show and seek feedback on how i did fo a first attempt to make a game. I will hopefully continue working on this project so thanks for the feedback.

[Mouse Ski]

tons of points off for ad spamming. If you want to make money off of your games, put some effort into it. Don't just crap out a game and then have ads every 10 seconds.

emmekappa responds:

thank you for the review. I have removed the ads when you submit a score

[Sarira]

Graphically and control-wise, this isn't bad. but because you submitted a "Broken game" You should really save this for your dumping grounds. That way, you can get help from fellow game makers on what you need to do to fix your game.

[the lost pixel man by phi]

wack controls and stolen music. You should really work on your own graphics and try to get in some practice with controlling your character. You move him/it (Not sure what the player character is because it's a blurry mess) and it doesn't function very well. Also, the mario music makes you more likely to be removed for copyright infringement. (Nintendo is cracking down hard on stuff like that right now)

[My Platformer]

Didn't feel complete. Keep your betas, alphas and tests on your dumping grounds. That way, you can get advice on how to tweak your games to make them better before turning them into a real submission. Good luck.

Deltahit responds:

Ow sorry, i actually added "Alpha" to the tags but i'll look for a way to change this.

[Toy Brick]

A glitchy mess. Nothing worked. When I pressed play on the right click menu, the game completely glitched out.

[Forbidden Jungle Fishing]

Really needed some instructions on what the fish do. It also needs a Pause button. Try making the window a bit smaller on your game, that way it's easier to see. Good luck.

HottScansen responds:

Thanks for your response, first upload, just testing the waters.

[Battalion Commander]

Extremely addictive! One weird glitch I noticed was that after a while, the sound turns itself off. Other than that, Great Game!